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Poetry Workshop Part II

October 11, 2010

Here are some more examples of Year 7’s poems following the visit from poet, Coral Rumble.

Please let them know what you think about their poems.

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  1. William permalink
    October 11, 2010 2:36 pm


    A silent, deadly wave
    Swallows the Ukraine
    One invader, Kiev’s great gates
    Cannot subdue

    A silent explosion
    Heard around the world
    Written on the faces of newspapers
    From America to Australia
    The world listened
    But could not help

    Ten years on
    A nuclear wasteland
    Flooded by radiation
    Condemned to isolation
    A quarantine, 200 miles wide

  2. George permalink
    October 11, 2010 2:36 pm

    The Killing

    It was silent
    Nobody moved
    She lay there in the middle of the road,

    People were screaming,
    Running around like headless chickens.
    The road was now more red than white.
    Everyone was shivering,
    Even though the sun was out.

    As the car zoomed off into the distance,
    Round the bend in a cloud of tyre smoke,
    Everyone stood in sorrow
    And the empty shotgun cartridges lay on the floor

  3. Kitty permalink
    October 11, 2010 2:37 pm

    Flashing downwards
    Crashing clouds darkening
    The storm was brewing in the skies

    The purring grey kitten asleep on the comfy armchair quietening as the sound dies.
    The kitten was as furry as a baby polar bear.
    The noise as relaxing as a massage
    The kitten’s tail twitches as it dreams into a deep sleep not noticing the weather outside.

  4. Laurence permalink
    October 11, 2010 2:37 pm

    Rain starts to fall
    birds take shelter in the trees
    as the puddles start to form the little kids
    start to play.


    Hail starts to fall
    The little children run inside
    The stones get bigger and bigger


    The hail turns to snow
    Turning the land to white wonderland

  5. Oliver permalink
    October 11, 2010 2:38 pm

    The Fire

    Sirens howling,
    The rig in orange,
    Burning oil combusting out of the top.

    Ambulances, police cars, and fire trucks,
    People panicking,
    Running away from the fire.

    The fireman,
    Wrestles with his hose,
    As the orange flames stain the darkness of light.

    Ambulances helping poor people,
    Hurt by the blaze,
    The battle forges on.

    As the blue water hits the angry fire,
    The fire strikes back,
    With a spit of Flame.

    The fire rises,
    As thunder fills the air,
    And the lightning lights up the dark blue sky.

    The ground gets wetter,
    The fire gets bigger,
    The noise level rises drastically.

    A scream leaves a body on the floor,
    It fills the air with a chill,
    That this might not be the only one who dies tonight

  6. Max permalink
    October 11, 2010 2:38 pm

    The snow

    Snow is falling,
    The hens find comfort under the trees,
    As the snow falls children come out to play,
    And snow men began to emerge,
    Snow is falling,

    The pond begins to freeze,
    The windows cover up with frost,
    Sledges thunder down the white covered road,
    Snow is falling,

    The carol bells are singing there joyful praise,
    And singing is all around,
    Happiness has filled the air,
    Snow is falling,

    The snow has stopped falling the snowmen droop away,
    The sledges go away,
    The carol bells stop singing,
    Snow is gone

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